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I voted! 😁

@Godlyfantasy12

Glad you found what you needed! I have to say I’m quite intrigued by the snatches you explained about the story and the scenarios! Your book sounds really cool 🙂

I’m afraid I am not much help with writing stuff most of the time, it’s like, amazing ideas or nothing, (to be honest usually nothing) but I like to try anyways,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 so am i wrong in assuming it would be similar to a hypertrophic scar? which looks raw and fresh but is actually healed, or is it a literal open wound?

if it was an open wound that might constantly be sticky and getting dirty because of whatever factors of the story, that could, cause infection which would also contribute to it not…[Read more]

@daisy-torres @r-m-archer thank you both

yeah i know amazon isn’t great to support but if it works… gotta pick the lesser of the evils and difficulties i guess lol

I’ll check out LuLu though

@koshka

I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to stay on track this time.

Mila means ‘beloved, gracious’, and in some translations ‘precious’.

Even though that isn’t her name’s proper spelling, it is fitting for her relationship with her father, as his favorite child. 🙂

@koshka that honestly reads like it could be a death scene, even tho it’s from first person pov! And it is so gripping!!

@koshka I do not know. (Tho the correct spelling is Milla (two l’s)) What is it?

There’s so much to one of my stories (HofE), especially so much I’m unsure about, that I can’t present the twists as they deserve.

The biggest twist in my FP,WS story is that the mentor dies at the end (which I hope will be surprising, but still mostly unexpected).

Other than that, I’ll have to get back to you on the HofE twists, once I’ve…[Read more]

Although she doesn’t have real DID, Shallan Davar from the Stormlight Archives has at least three personalities, and might help with the having personalities aspect of DID.

Other than that, I don’t have much advice. I’ve never been someone to relate a whole lot to DID because it’s not something I have nor do I often imagine myself as a different…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

sorry, been a busy and mostly only had time for reading, reading, and more reading.

I don’t think I have any questions, but I do maybe have some advice for your question.

Could you have Brenven be an energetic, fiery child and there’s some sort of prophecy or promise woven around him that she finds out, and due to those two…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I WANNA KNOW THE PLOT TWIST! 😁

@kathleenraumm

I honestly could say everything and anything, but often I prefer to use different ways of looking at the world as inspiration, though that’s not always the case. Once I worldbuilded simply from the desire to have magic in the story and there are four kids with it and the king’s family, and then I dove into why only they had mag…[Read more]

No need to apologize! I understand that urge and need. Every writer has it at some point. 😉

@hirsegirl13

np! And I can’t wait to hear what you come up with, if you decide to share!

The worldbuilding and the characters.

I have found that one of my favorite things about writing is the worldbuilding (which explains why I enjoy writing fantasy so much). Plus, the worldbuilding of this particular project I’m especially proud of. It’s pretty simple, compared to many, but it’s still complex and developing. And I love it.

I am al…[Read more]

@horsegirl13

What sort of underwater things can you imagine? What is the government system for the fish and sharks? Do fish have to hide from their predators, like sharks, still? How do they manage that? Does that affect travel and commerce? Is there much trading between the different places and groups? Is there magic of some sort that protects…[Read more]

Well, @joy-caroline, your side character is a human too.

What is something he wants? What is his desire in life? Will he be focusing on a having it while helping out his friend, or will helping his friend be his entire focus for the duration of the story, like Sam in The Lord of the Rings? Why are the two friends? What caused them to become…[Read more]

This one’s not a complete scene, or a proper one, because it is all dialogue, but I still like it a lot (despite the fact that it is a less than perfect rewrite of the original that I lost due to shocking technology, and is but half the perfection compared to the absolutely satisfactory original).

[A little context: Hager is the antagonist of the…[Read more]